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Poetry in Motion  

naemya 41F  
979 posts
12/20/2010 7:18 am
Poetry in Motion


I read the blogs of some ladies on TSmeet who like to post their poetry. I find it interesting that they would post stuff as emo as poetry on a site made for the purpose of finding casual sex partners. Like really, in the sea of guys more interested in showing off their cock pics than anything else (except actual sex, of course), would these ladies actually find an sizable audience for their inspired works of art? Or just lots of posts from horny guys telling them to call their number now for a rockin' good time?

Well, a long time ago when I was younger and more emo, I used to be an wannabe poet myself. So allow me to indulge myself in an experiment on what fascinating responses I receive on this post.

Here's a rather emo piece I wrote in 2004, which was inspired by my first sort-of-boyfriend (it was complicated) at a time when I actually felt guilty for losing my virginity before marriage (In case you're wondering, I kinda gotten past that stage. Duh).

This Moment
Lying here in your arms, so strong yet so gentle.
So comforting amidst this conflict in me
And I just wish this moment would never end
Though I know it must

I love the smell of your hair
I love the taste of your lips
I love the warmth of your body
I love the touch of your hand caressing my skin
I love how you say you love caressing my skin
I love the power of you inside of me
And how you know how to take me
Into feelings of pure ecstasy
Yet I know that I don't love you
I don't even know you
And what feels so right, I know is wrong
What I want so badly, I know I shouldn't have

If there was no time
If there were no consequences
If there were no beliefs and no truth
If only we could live life on emotions and touch
I would gladly stay in this moment with you
And relive it with you again and again
As it is, all I can do is lie here with you in your arms
Your warm, comforting arms
And with this moment would never end...


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/20/2010 7:21 am

Hmm, can hardly believe this came from me. I think the most poetic I can muster now is "I'm prettier than a duck, would you like a fuck?"


Baltasar45 63M
9207 posts
12/20/2010 9:37 am

Posting my poetry in my blog played an important part in finding a partner on here.
Of course, the path was longer and more curvy than 'Nice poetry, let's fuck!'

<- Profile photo courtesy of Bonding with coworkers


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/20/2010 10:01 am

Hmm, I guess for a guy, posting poetry would be more effective in attracting a female. Makes you appear to be more aware of your emotions and hence more likely to make a good partner. Chicks dig that. Not quite sure it works the same vice versa though.


rm_muff_diver74 50M
63 posts
12/20/2010 8:06 pm

Not sure if I could ever write any poetry or anything sensible for that matter that might passably be called very bad prose. It was a good piece though (not trying to blow smoke up you know where).It may or may not have defined who you were and what you were looking for at that point in your life. Then we all lose our innocence and grow up (not necessarily in that order or even grow up for that matter). I must say your follow up post rhymed. I suspect you planed that all along. LOL


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/20/2010 9:24 pm

Yeah, poetry must rhyme, only then it's worth your time

(hey, I did it again! I shall now challenge to do my posts on this thread rhyme. Would you like a dime?)


rm_muff_diver74 50M
63 posts
12/20/2010 9:42 pm

LOL. You're evil but civil. You're definitely doing it on purpose now.


KLman62 61M

12/21/2010 4:06 am

Naemya my precious darling
Poetry reveals more of your inner feelings
The more I read the more intrigue I am
Would you please give me a ring?

(crap... but at least it rhymes)


rm_aladin1978 46M
3762 posts
12/21/2010 8:58 am


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/21/2010 9:57 am

Haha, KLMan, you are a persistent one aren't you? Unfortunately I still stick to my principles.


KLman62 61M

12/21/2010 6:37 pm

Rules are meant to be broken....I can assure you I don't bite! HeHeHe...

Seriously, I enjoy the "verbal exchanges" currently. Add me on MSN chat with my info revealed please...


rm_O16SOO6O89 35M
31 posts
12/22/2010 11:21 am

Oh dear, I'm never a person to mangle poetic sentences. Or even grasp it emotionally. I mean, it's just too depressing lol

But, no offense to your 2004 effort


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/23/2010 9:03 am

Hey man, you haven't been on here for like forever.


rm_O16SOO6O89 35M
31 posts
12/23/2010 10:46 am

Haha yeah, I got really stumped IRL. Assignments are pilling up so much that I don't even have the time or energy to 'release myself'

That expains my foul mood. And worst off, my MSN contacts just resetted and I lost everything...

Even your phone number is gone. But that's another funny story to share lol. (Actually my phone jatuh dalam jamban)


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/24/2010 10:20 am

Lol, that happened to my old phone before (it falling in the jamban). It somehow managed to survive though. Nokia phones are pretty hardy!


rm_O16SOO6O89 35M
31 posts
12/26/2010 8:48 am

lol, it's great that yours can be salvaged. Mine just fell into the deep abyss of nothingness, even the toilet lady says it's too deep to grab anything out...


naemya 41F  
336 posts
12/26/2010 10:10 am

Well, you probably wouldn't want it anymore anyway after all that


rm_O16SOO6O89 35M
31 posts
12/26/2010 5:24 pm

Heh heh exxxxactly ;D It's best to stay as an offering to the toilet gods. I -know- they're out there.


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